on writing a well-researched paper, Tochukwu. You have used a variety of
reputable sources in your theory section and to support your discussion points.
What Needs Work:
I’ve chosen three priorities to
focus on as you revise.
feel that you could provide a bit more detail to explain some of your topic
sentences where you have paraphrased a point to introduce a new discussion point.
When you paraphrase a point, you need to remember that you have read the whole
source and understand the context in which that point was made. However, your
readers have probably not read the whole source document and therefore don’t
have the background information on that point.
is an example to illustrate:
“The present-day business environment is very
dynamic with companies experiencing changes both in their internal and external
environments (Boutilier, 2012).”
is today’s business environment dynamic? What types of internal and external
changes are companies facing?
You can strengthen your discussion on the impact that these
changes have on companies by providing a bit more detail on the types of
changes that you are talking about and why they are coming about. This will
help your readers better understand the subsequent points that you make.
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